Editing Process: 12.02.13

We aim to receive some feedback for our first draft. We have burnt the film to a disk and I will be uploading this to YouTube in order to send a link to our target audience. 
We will ask them to comment on the strengths of the film, ad also where there could be some improvements.
With our criticisms from our teachers, we know where there could be some improvements. The following improvements that we have been made aware of are:

• Not enough of Aidan; add shots of Aidan into the film
• Repetitive running shots - to many shots of running through a field
• Mr Hinch's voice does not work - sounding to overproduced 
• Interspercing the shots of the forest scene and interview scene